Hello, I've been looking into CRUX a bit on the weekend and found quite a few issues with the text of the current Handbook while reading it. So, here are the ones I've recorded so far (with fixes), ordered by section: Section 2.2 * “The usage of ports helps keep your packages up-to-date…” * up-to-date -> up to date * “If you are using CRUX we highly recommend to subscribe to our low volume mailing list, because security updates and updates that need user action are announced there .” * Insert comma after “CRUX”. * to subscribe -> subscribing * low volume -> low-volume * Omit comma after “because”. * Omit space before period. Section 2.3.2 * “…licensed through the GNU General Public License.” * I'd just make that “released under the GNU General Public License.” (That's GNU's own wording. Cf. https://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-howto.html) Section 3 * Heading is missing top margin. Section 3.1 * “A minimum of 768MB system memory is required to install CRUX from CD-ROM or removable flash drive.” * Insert “a” before “CD-ROM”. * “The kernel used during installation, i.e. when booting from the CRUX ISO image…” * Add comma after “i.e.”. Section 3.2 * The first sentence should not be formatted as a list item. * “You will be automatically logged in as as root on tty1 (root has no password set).” * Omit superfluous “as”. * I'd also move “automatically” before “be”. * “CRUX supports all the filesystems supported as root filesystems by the linux kernel:” * linux -> Linux * “…the day you want to upgrade/reinstall/remove your system.” * I'd say “upgrade, reinstall or remove”. * “Make sure the appropriate userspace filesystem-tools are installed.” * filesystem-tools -> filesystem tools * The 4th code bock is missing the mount command for /home. * “If you missed/forgot to install certain packages, you can just mount the CRUX installation media and use pkgadd to install them.” * missed/forgot -> missed or forgot * the CRUX installation media -> the CRUX installation medium * “Remove the CRUX installation media from your computer and reboot from harddisk.” * media -> medium Section 3.3 * “You will be automatically logged in as as root on tty1 (root has no password set).” * Omit superfluous “as”. * I'd also move “automatically” before “be”. * “…to determine which files to upgrade, and which files to not upgrade.” * to not upgrade -> not to upgrade Section 4 * Heading is missing top margin. * “The following sections will in short describe how to use the package utilities.” * Move “in short” behind “describe”. Section 4.4 * “The contents of the function can differ significantly if the program is build in some other way…” * build -> built * “Please see the PortGuidelines for additional information.''” * Omit single quotes after the period. That's it so far. Nice web design, by the way. -- Michael